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Peer Review 1

Peer Review of Jessica Aramini’s blog post, which can be found here:

Hey Jess, I really enjoyed reading this blog post. The way in which you established your position on the quote was direct and set the tone for the rest of the post. Further, the way in which you made reference to both poetry and visual art helped in creating a holistic argument that was cohesive and enhanced your viewpoint. My only criticism is that I would have loved to have seen you dive deeper into the aspects of corruption and greed that you identified within your opening paragraph. Otherwise, I found this quite an insightful post that I thoroughly enjoyed reading.

  • Cameron

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